Neti Neti

 

This body has become the Dharma’s tuning fork.

Now, when you touch me

I buzz soft reassurances: 

“Not this.”

“Not that.”

Here collapses into there.

Inside turns out. 

Then

hush.

God is here.

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This week's challenge: "onomatopoeia"

This week’s challenge: “onomatopoeia”

 

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15 comments on “Neti Neti

  1. rashmenon says:

    Congratulations on the Trifecta win. Gorgeous piece. I too am wowing the ‘here collapses into there’.

  2. Love the Dharma’s tuning fork. And Here collapses into there.

  3. atrm61 says:

    Absolutely divine-can be interpreted in so many different ways:-)

  4. I loved this, too. Great job in such a short space. Thanks for linking up.

  5. the words actually seem to hum

  6. Linda Vernon says:

    I like this about as much as I could like anything. You have such a definitive voice that comes through even in this short wonderful piece!

  7. jannatwrites says:

    I love the flow of this (and the final line was perfect) but I the “here collapses into there line” really caught my attention. Love it!

  8. Draug419 says:

    Very cool.

  9. One word:

    Brilliant!

  10. Kir Piccini says:

    oh, I loved that. I felt myself melting into the words.

    So glad I came over to read this. Have a wonderful weekend.

  11. Lori Wise says:

    Simply beautiful.

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