Sadhana

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surrender.  

the rebellion comes to

lift you from

…….this illusion.       

.

And then:

.

remember when You

first created stars?

how You danced

 inside

 every

last

one?

.

here is the Truth:

You are the wet

in the

rain. 

.

.

.

trifecta

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14 comments on “Sadhana

  1. jeglatter says:

    so sweet.:)
    -Jennifer

  2. Pb says:

    I love the feel to this piece. It has a profundity that feels slippery and elusive to me

    • kenajos says:

      then there is no doubt that the silent part of you knows it completely and will shout it out at just the right moment.

      Thank you for coming by and leaving a kind word.

  3. kymminbarcelona says:

    That last stanza just blew me away.

  4. atrm61 says:

    Truth expressed in all its beauty!Loved it!Great name too:-)

  5. SIni says:

    that was a good truth

  6. Draug419 says:

    “…the wet in the rain.” I don’t know why but that bit makes me wiggle with awesome glee 😀 Gah, it’s so good!

    • kenajos says:

      ‘wiggle with awesome glee’ is just as fantastic a turn of phrase! I’m just going to start saying that now…’honey these pancakes are making me wiggle with awesome glee!”

  7. Christine says:

    That last stanza is lovely. What a great way to express truth.

  8. barbara says:

    I agree about the last line. I also love the thought of dancing inside the stars.

  9. nessa1313 says:

    I like that. “You are the wet in the rain.” Very nice.

  10. Suzanne says:

    This is beautiful! Love the last line – so perfect!

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